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Zeke Sikelianos 9 years ago
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docs/api/content-tracing.md

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 # contentTracing
 
-> Debug your application using Chromium's content module.
+> Collect tracing data from Chromium's content module for finding performance
+bottlenecks and slow operations.
 
 This module does not include a web interface
 so you need to open `chrome://tracing/` in a Chrome browser and load the

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docs/api/desktop-capturer.md

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 # desktopCapturer
 
-> Capture audio, video, and images from a microphone, camera, or
-screen using the `getUserMedia` API.
+> List `getUserMedia` sources for capturing audio, video, and images from a
+microphone, camera, or screen.
 
 ```javascript
 // In the renderer process.

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docs/api/download-item.md

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 # DownloadItem
 
-> Trigger file downloads from remote sources.
+> Control file downloads from remote sources.
 
-`DownloadItem` is an EventEmitter represents a download item in Electron. It
-is used in `will-download` event of `Session` module, and allows users to
+`DownloadItem` is an EventEmitter that represents a download item in Electron.
+It is used in `will-download` event of `Session` module, and allows users to
 control the download item.
 
 ```javascript

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docs/api/protocol.md

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 # protocol
 
-> Register a custom protocol to intercept click events from other running
-applications.
+> Register a custom protocol and intercept existing protocols.
 
 An example of implementing a protocol that has the same effect as the
 `file://` protocol:

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docs/api/remote.md

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 # remote
 
-> Communicate between the renderer process and the main process.
+> Use main process modules from the renderer process.
 
 The `remote` module provides a simple way to do inter-process communication
 (IPC) between the renderer process (web page) and the main process.

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docs/api/session.md

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 # session
 
-> Manage browser cookies, cache, and other session data.
+> Manage browser sessions, cookies, cache, proxy settings, etc.
 
 The `session` module can be used to create new `Session` objects.
 

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docs/api/synopsis.md

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 # Synopsis
 
-> Info about Node.js and the main and renderer processes.
+> How to use Node.js and Electron APIs.
 
 All of [Node.js's built-in modules](http://nodejs.org/api/) are available in
 Electron and third-party node modules also fully supported as well (including

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docs/api/web-contents.md

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 # webContents
 
-> Render and control web pages using lifecycle events.
+> Render and control web pages.
 
 `webContents` is an
 [EventEmitter](http://nodejs.org/api/events.html#events_class_events_eventemitter).